On Mon, 21 Jun 2004 21:00:51 UTC, Andy M Jenkins
<(E-Mail Removed)> wrote:
Andy, I think your site is good....and it looks quite professional. But
it is marred by grammatical and spelling errors. Perhspa you could
employ a proof reader or just ask a friend to look over it??
For example (and I'm not having a particular 'go'; just pointing out
that there really are errors):
> Been a while since the last posting, and so some of this is not really
> *news* per say.
That's 'per se'.
> Ofcom raps Tiscali over TV ad's
> http://snipurl.com/78kx
That's "ads" (without the aprostrophe)
etc.
Just in the newsgroup, it isn't a great problem. But on the site...to
take one story...
> BTWholesale confirm "ADSL bonding" stance
> http://snipurl.com/78bd
para 2, line 4: 'hole', not 'whole'
para 4, line 1: should be "you're", not "your"
I hope you'll take this as constructive criticism...the stuff on the
site is more important than the bits here, of course. It's good...but is
spoiled by the little things. Your image (and believability) is damaged
by any error, unfortunately.
--
Bob Eager
begin a new life...dump Windows!