online business order issue

I have developed online store and have gifts products i.e home, office
decoration gifts. wholesale gifts for family, gifts for her and gifts
for him, christmas gifts, use computer and laptop etc. but still i am
unable to collect any order online. My unique visitor is also too low.
Any company would like to suggest me any method which improve my
business or market my website. So, please contact with me on pm.
Thanks for your time, waiting for your reply

mali


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thebobbyshop wrote:
> Any company would like to suggest me any method which improve my
> business or market my website.

Proper grammar and punctuation comes to mind.

DTC wrote:
> thebobbyshop wrote:
>> Any company would like to suggest me any method which improve my
>> business or market my website.
>
> Proper grammar and punctuation comes to mind.

Proper grammar and punctuation COME to mind.

Plural subject takes plural verb. Perhaps you could work on your own
English before correcting others?

RWEmerson wrote:
> DTC wrote:
>> thebobbyshop wrote:
>>> Any company would like to suggest me any method which improve my
>>> business or market my website.
>> Proper grammar and punctuation comes to mind.
>
> Proper grammar and punctuation COME to mind.
>
> Plural subject takes plural verb. Perhaps you could work on your own
> English before correcting others?

They came as singular thoughts.

On Wed, 21 Nov 2007 17:48:07 -0700, RWEmerson
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>DTC wrote:

>> thebobbyshop wrote:
>>> Any company would like to suggest me any method which improve my
>>> business or market my website.

>> Proper grammar and punctuation comes to mind.

>Proper grammar and punctuation COME to mind.
>
>Plural subject takes plural verb. Perhaps you could work on your own
>English before correcting others?

Got it. A gram of grammar is worth a pounding of punctuation.
I'll spare you my "come" joke as this is a family newsgroup.


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