McJank <(E-Mail Removed)> wrote:
> Hello everybody!!
Hello Mc!!
> I'm now working on a own site,
That's "a site of my own". Perhaps the work could include remedial
primary-school english?
> would you suggest me what subject should mainly talk about which is the most
> popular.
Yerrrrs. I refuse to believe anyone who has passed primary school in an
english speaking country can make that many mistakes in one line.
That's "would you suggest", not would you "suggest ME". "suggest" does
not take the target of the proposal as its object, but the proposal
itself. It's also "what subject WE should talk (mainly) talk about",
since it is not the subject which does the talking, but "we" who are the
subject for the verb "talk". And then "which is" is the start of a new
sentence, as far as I can make out, so it should be preceded by a
full stop and be capitalised. And then there are quite a few things
missing.
I would suggest, in order, as subjects
1) starting new sites of your own;
2) navel watching and other forms of introspection;
3) wool gathering;
4) remedial english.
I reckon the last will be the most popular.
Peter
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